Tuesday 10 September 2013

On Dangling Participles

They are grammatically ambiguous phrases that occur as the result of a writer modifying the wrong part (i.e. object, subject) of a sentence. 

Incorrect:
  • After performing in the dance hall for years, the policeman finally asked the ballerina out.
  • Having arrived late to school, a note was required.
  • The audition was a failure, not having practiced their lines enough.
Revised:
  • After performing in the dance hall for years, the ballerina was finally asked out by the policeman.
  • Having arrived late to school, the student required a note.
  • They failed the audition, not having practiced their lines enough.

(After changing colours in the fall, the leaves looked beautiful)

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